20182013考研英语真题英语写作押题：保护名胜古迹

　　20182013考研英语真题英语写作押题：保护名胜古迹
Directions:

Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1. describe the picture briefly,

2. interpret its intended meaning, and then

3. give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
 

　　
审题与纲要

图画较为纷繁，可是遍地所转达的消息占有一致性，所以在描述时应先找出主要消息和它们之间的共性，省得描述过于冗杂或许偏离主题。透彻而言，图中揭示了把双臂吊在树枝上以及坐在树上看风景的行动，也绘制了骑在塑像上拍照玩耍等行动。此外，图中也不乏挥动折断的树枝、用刀在树上及塑像上刻字等卑怯行动。根据背景消息论断，此处应为观光游览区，而古树和塑像均属历史遗址。很显然，这些孩子的行动对古迹已然构成了败坏。至此本图的寓意已经明白可见：控诉人们对旅游景点以及名胜古迹不加爱护和随意败坏的行动。

第一段：描述图画。图画的末节消息有：孩子们的各种败坏行动以及古树和塑像上的累累伤痕。诚然图中人物行动不一，但性质相同，行文时可重点描述一两个行动，其他简明综合即可。

第二段：展示寓意，充分延展。首先可点明图画寓意；然后关系的确，以人们熟悉的事件为例，论证见解；最后可深层剖析现象的原因，为末段的召唤作铺垫。

第三段：综合谈论。批驳败坏遗址的行动，召唤栽培防守名胜古迹的意识。

经典模板范文

A couple of young children are playing around a vigorous old tree. One of them is hanging his arms on the tree’s branch, another is sitting on the tree, and someone is even carving it with a knife. Lots of characters are marked on the statue as well. Undoubtedly, what these kids do provides a scene of disharmony, being one of a number of threats to the ancient tree and the statue.

The picture clearly warns us of the problem that many irreplaceable historical relics are damaged by individuals, whether children or adults. Such unpleasant scenes are not uncommon in many tourist attractions nowadays. Two scandals recently made headlines nationwide: a widely publicized case is the graffiti—Ding Jinhao was here—etched into Egypt’s ancient Luxor temple; the other is that the copper urn of 300 years in the Forbidden City was carved a heart by a cou考研英语多少分ple to show their affection. Why do such unhappy events continue despite repeated prohibition? One explanation is the lax management and ineffective supervision of the related departments. However, the one deserving special mention is the lack of preservation awareness.

It is a contemptible action to damage the historical relics at the expense of our cultural heritage. For the sake of ourselves and our descendents, relics preservation consciousness must be cultivated and考研英语复试怎么准备moral education must be promoted.

几个小孩正在围着一棵遒劲的古树玩耍。有人把双臂吊在树枝上，有人坐在树上，更有甚者拿了一把小刀在树上刻描述画。旁边的塑像也充满刻痕。毫无疑问，这些小孩的所作所为揭示了一幅极端不谐和的画面，同时也是对古树和雕像构成的好多威逼之一。

这幅图明白地提醒我们留神一个问题：好多无可轮换的历史遗址正被人们（无论小孩或成人）所败坏。如今，此类令人不悦的场景在好多旅游景点不足为奇。近日就有两个丑闻登上了报纸头条：一个广为人知的事例是在埃及卢克索神庙里刻着丁锦昊到此一游的涂鸦；另一个则是故宫三百年的铜缸被情侣画心刻字秀恩爱一事。为什么这样令人不快的事情会屡禁不止呢？一个原因是相关部门管教蓬松，鞭策不力。可是，最上算提及的一点应该是防守意识的缺失。

以文化传承为代价趴窝历史古迹是一种卑怯的行动。为了自己和后嗣，我们应该栽培防守意识，并普及德育。

靓词靓语

relic n.遗址; 遗物

graffiti n.涂鸦；涂画

etch v.蚀刻；凿出

lax a.蓬松的；不苛刻的

scandal n.丑闻；流言蜚语

at the expense of 以……为代价

disharmony n.不谐和；不一致

attraction n.游览胜地；吸引

contemptible a.卑怯的；可鄙的

for the sake of 为了；为了……的实惠

靓句剖析

①Undoubtedly, what these kids do provides a scene of disharmony, being one of a number of threats to the ancient tree and the statue.

本句可用来对较多的图画消息进行综合综合。其两大亮点：（1）采纳what引导的主语从句，对kids的行动所构成的趴窝进行了描述，同时使文章句式富于变换；（2）当前分词短语being one of a number of threats…作陪伴状语置于句末，填充说明kids所做之事的趴窝。

② Such unpleasant scenes are not uncommon in many tourist attractions nowadays.

本句可用于示例论证，常见的手法是在该句后，辅以透彻的事例。下文便以丁锦昊和故宫秀恩爱两则新闻为例，证明越来越多的人在败坏名胜古迹。本句主语Such unpleasant scenes指代上句中的many irreplaceable historical relics are damaged，既防止用词重复，又使行文贯串亲密。同时，not与uncommon构成双重抵赖，为简短的表述加强了语气。在示例较多的段落中，应用简短的句子反而能起到意想不到的成效，上算考生借鉴和学习。

③ Two scandals recently made headlines nationwide: a widely publicized case is the graffiti—Ding Jinhao was here—etched into Egypt’s ancient Luxor temple; the other is that the copper urn of 300 years in the Forbidden City was carved a heart by a couple to show their affection.

本句可用于论证见解时，对两个或多个占有共性的事例进行描述。本句以Two scandals开始，同时句中应用分号，将两个事例归并描述，事例一中，作者穿越破折号灵巧地引出graffiti的透彻内容，起到加分成效；事例二中，作者应用被动语态描述动作，并以动词不定式短语to show their affection引出动作的目的，完好地描述事件的同时，又防止了与事例一在句式构造上的重复。

源自《阿卡索外教网》
 

　　
192013考研英语真题第一阶段必备书单：

单词：

学渣专用的词汇书：《啧啧英语》（660句搞定2013考研英语真题词汇）

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长难句：

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真题：

英语渣渣专用的真题——《啧啧英语》根基加强版（英语二：2013考研英语真题圣经）

　　

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